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Post by devon wilkins on Mar 26, 2007 11:13:19 GMT 10
Student Application Character Information
Full Name: Devon John Wilkins Blood Type: Pureblood Age: 11 Year: 1 DOB: October 31, 1995 Preferred Hogwarts House: Slytherin
Appearance: His hair is a silvery blonde and is silky to the touch. His eyes are a pool of grey. His skin is a very pale colour. His lips are a tad bit of a shade paler than his skin. His physical weakness is his bones are very brittle and he has many injuries constantly. His most important feature is his metamorphagus ability meaning he can change his appearance at will.
Personal History: His mother is Rhea Wilkins. His father is John Wilkins. His mother's father is Harry Warren. His mother's mother is Rita Warren. His father's father is Harold Wilkins. His father's mother is Hillary Wilkins.His mother is a veela.
Personality: His greatest personality trait is his diabolical self-being. His second greatest personality trait is his creativity. His greatest personal weakness is being kind. His second greatest personal weakness is that he can't lie to those he loves and ends up telling them the truth. His personality is mostly considered as being a diabolical, rotten, evil, little rascal.
Place Of Residence: He lives in Paris (which is in france which is in Europe).
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Post by Nayau Zanther on Mar 26, 2007 17:50:17 GMT 10
You kind of contradicted yourself by saying he is kind but he is diabolical and nasty. Please sort that out to make it more clear. And You need to expand on his metamorphagus ability, to show that you have a high understanding of the ability. Just fix those things and then you will be accepted
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Post by bujingyi201 on Jun 12, 2012 11:22:25 GMT 10
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